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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Phyllis, for this lovely, timely poem... as my mother is in hospice. Larry Schug's opening lines, "Our bodies die like the bodies of trees. / No matter how we strive for the sky..." will stay with me in these waning days of my mother's life.

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Brigid Beckman's avatar

I will hold you and your mother in my heart as you journey into these tender waning days.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

Thank you for blessing Jan and her mother, Brigid, through these words.

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Phyllis.

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Brigid!

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Lisa Butler's avatar

You are also in my prayers, Jan. This also made me think of my mom, who died of cancer in 1983. Such a beautiful poem. Prayers and love to you.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

You’re a dear to wrap Jan in care, Lisa!

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Lisa.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

What is your mother’s name, Jan? I will lay a blessing stone for her and you and all who love her.

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Phyllis. My mother is Darlene Haag.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

I’ll lay a blessing stone for her now.

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Phyllis!

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Myrtle Russell's avatar

Peaceful Blessings to your mother and to you and your family!

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

Thank you for wrapping Jan in care!

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Jan Haag's avatar

Thank you, Myrtle.

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Katharina Bossmann's avatar

Such beautiful truths- thank you for this!

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Casey Bottono's avatar

'Each of us leave behind our own song

To comfort those left staring at the sky...'

Solace takes many forms, and I thank you for sharing this one.

Best wishes,

Casey

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

Your song is precious, Casey.

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Thomasina Balabon's avatar

Thank you for this, Phyllis. This "song" is lovely and so beautiful to know we leave behind our own song - to not be forgotten. Blessings to you always!

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

I know the song you’re singing is precious, Thomasina!

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Valerie Campbell's avatar

This brings to mind the Indigenous belief that each human haas a song that they sing before their travel onward. I have a song and when I am in distress I do sing it. What we leave behind has meaning in energetic waves and memory....song is like that. Thank you for sharing this.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

Lovely! Thank you for sharing this reflection.

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Brigid Beckman's avatar

But our souls are songbirds...

My soul's song is nourished this morning, and I thank you Phyllis, as always, for providing a raft of nourishment. 💕

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

May you keep singing your soul’s song with full throat!

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Myrtle Russell's avatar

Beautiful! Blessing us all to live our best lives so that when it is time to transition, we leave beautiful songs that inspire others to live their best life! Thanks forthereminderPhyllis!❤️

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

Your song is glorious, Myrtle!

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Jeanette Mayo's avatar

Oh my, this poem knocked my melancholy sock feathers off. And the poet is a fellow Minnesotan! Thank you both, Larry and Phyllis.

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Phyllis Cole-Dai's avatar

🤪

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Subhana Cathy Graf's avatar

Amen.

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