Rise to the light and fall again
This grabbed me: “Then I might know like water how to balance The weight of hope against the light of patience”
My favorite lines too.
Same couplet resonated in me:
Then I might know like water how to balance
The weight of hope against the light of patience
And the rhyming works, as it supports rather than competes with the imagery and the sense of the poem.
Amen. The rhyming works just like the water . . . ?
This grabbed me: “Then I might know like water how to balance The weight of hope against the light of patience”
My favorite lines too.
Same couplet resonated in me:
Then I might know like water how to balance
The weight of hope against the light of patience
And the rhyming works, as it supports rather than competes with the imagery and the sense of the poem.
Amen. The rhyming works just like the water . . . ?