Watching the parade of years and thoughts
At 74, this is a beautiful poem, lifting me up to Grace.
Well hiya Frank! Good to see you pop up. May you have all the grace you need!
Ohhh, I love this! Poignant imagery.
Brilliant!! Love this 👌🏻
Especially:
- “I’m grateful for small victories.”
- “And the mind, watching its parade of thoughts
enter and leave, begins to see them
for what they are: jugglers, fire swallowers, acrobats
tossing their batons in the air.”
That part always makes me smile!
"The way the heart still beats time
in the cathedral of the ribs."
Bowing to this word-smithing showing up as a boost, thanks to Phyllis and Danusha Lameris!
Danusha is an amazing poet!
This is a beautiful line: 'The way the heart still beats time
in the cathedral of the ribs.'
Isn't it though?!
At 74, this is a beautiful poem, lifting me up to Grace.
Well hiya Frank! Good to see you pop up. May you have all the grace you need!
Ohhh, I love this! Poignant imagery.
Brilliant!! Love this 👌🏻
Especially:
- “I’m grateful for small victories.”
- “And the mind, watching its parade of thoughts
enter and leave, begins to see them
for what they are: jugglers, fire swallowers, acrobats
tossing their batons in the air.”
That part always makes me smile!
"The way the heart still beats time
in the cathedral of the ribs."
Bowing to this word-smithing showing up as a boost, thanks to Phyllis and Danusha Lameris!
Danusha is an amazing poet!
This is a beautiful line: 'The way the heart still beats time
in the cathedral of the ribs.'
Isn't it though?!